halfpanel08

Bre and Julianne were wanting pictures done, so they begged me and this is what we came up with.. (mind you it was 101* outside, so they didn't last long)

urbexHHR

Those look similar to the ones on Facebook!!! Very good Paul!

twistrman

looks good - just a couple comments.

- 101 degrees, are you freaking crazy, i wouldn't even go outside.

- Make your copyright watermark a lot less obtrusive. It is really taking away from the photos right now and that is the exact opposite of what you want to do. Try to keep it to a standard lower right or left corner with one for dark backgrounds, one for light, and one with a slight blurring or glow around it for detailed photos. For example in the second one from the bottom, your watermark is becoming the focal point of the photo with the middle track leading towards it, etc. Makes it hard to focus on the rest of the photo.

- Ditch the angled shot. We end up with photos like this at work quite often when a client has a photographer go into their law firm, and take photos. I don't know why they do it. It doesn't really add anything to the photo, if anything it detracts for it. Then 80% of the time it makes the photo unusable to us.

Keep up the good work though. I have been wanting to take some more shots around town here, but in the mid 90's, i stay inside.

halfpanel08

good advice twistrman. ill keep it all in mind while im shooting.
(i like the angle n tilt shots personally, lol. ill snag some every now n then for keep sakes)

furious

I think angled shots can look good. maybe not so much with people as the objects of the shots. and I agree with twistrman on the watermarks.

Mowgli

The villains' lair shots on the old TV show Batman are always angled shots or "skewed".
Just sayin'

I think vertical on the bottom right side consistently would be a nice trademark feature.
But I like the vertical sig on the rail.
I think that one was personal like the angled shot. Right Paul?

Jolly

when I see little sister, I'm thinking a lot smaller......


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